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This is my first shot at a Fanfiction...Please enjoy. It's a reader x Death the Kid.

(W/N)= weapons name
(Y/N)= Your name
(E/C)= eye color

NOTE: This Fanfiction is based on the chapter in the Manga where Maka and the gang go rescue Kid when he gets stuck in that book (forgot the name ^_^). (one of the best chapters, I might add. It's hilarious, but also very dramatic.)

You were now lying in a hospital bed at the dispensary of the DWMA. Pain fell over your body as you remembered...


[flash back]

"Kid, please don't make me do this.." You pleaded. He didn't give a reply, Instead he raised his two guns and pointed them at you.

"Kid! What're you doing?! This is insane!" Liz tried to tame the reaper to no avail. "(Y/N)! Get the hell out of here before he does something he's gonna regret!"

This felt..

"(Y/N), that's not kid anymore, he's become mad!" Your weapon (W/N) hollered at you. It didn't seem to faze you.


"I guess you're right." You said holding up your weapon.

You didn't like this feeling one bit...It was true you had admired Kid in the past, But now he was going mad. Right in front of you. It made you feel vulgar.

"I'm so sorry." You barely whispered, and ran towards Kid with the speed you didn't think you had in you, and tried to swipe him with your weapon. He blocked it by crossing his guns at his chest.

He scoffed. Your blood ran cold.

"Don't make me laugh," his voice made your skin crawl. Your eyes widened in fear. This wasn't like him, not at all.

"Even if you wanted to kill me, You couldn't. Don't fool yourself (Y/N)." he said, Raising his guns and pointing them at you once again. A split sounded through the air and echoed in your eardrums- he had fired. The two bullets came hurdling at you, frozen in place by shock you couldn't move an inch.


The two bullets; One hit your forehead and the other embedded itself into your stomach. Before you knew it, you were coughing up blood, the taste of iron rolling onto your tongue. The crimson colored liquid stained your clothes, eventually you fall backwards slowly dropping your weapon and hit the ground with a thud as you clutch your stomach in pain. It made a clatter as it slowly hit the ground.

This was the day you were going to die. You knew this.. You didn't want to die like this. No sane person would.

Before you blacked out all you could here was the screams of (W/N).

[End of Flashback]

You had survived but barely.

"Professor Stein! is she going to be okay?!" A bleak voice, recognized as (W/N) asked worriedly.

"The wounds she received were very harsh on her body. The bullets Kid used were inflicted with madness....So if she's lucky she'll win this battle...But if she isn't madness will slowly eat away at her soul, until it deceives her." He answered.

"We shouldn't of let her go after kid alone." You heard Maka's worried voice. "Please be okay (Y/N).." Tsubaki cut in.

"I feel awful.." Liz said.

"I won't be able to live with myself if she dies.." Kid spoke. Their was strain in his voice and a sense of overwhelming treachery, as if he hadn't slept for days...How long had you been out anyways?

"Well, let her get some rest." Stein finally spoke, and motioned for everyone to the exit.
"(Y/N) are you awake?" Opening one eye, you nodded tiredly.

"The wounds you took were very bad, but you're going to be just fine once you take these," he held up a bag. "Since the bullets Kid used were inflicted with madness, take these to reduce the threat."

You took them with a tall glass of water from the bedside stand.

"Thanks. If it wasn't for your help I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be here.." Your voice sounded unfamiliar and unusual; almost foreign.

"I wouldn't say that. Kid and (W/N) brought you back here." He paused and sat down on his chair, pulling his cigarette from his mouth.

"Look I know Kid is the last person you'd want to talk to, but if I were you I would. He's going through a rough time right now. You should of seen him in here earlier..." He didn't have to say anymore.

"Okay, I'll go. It might be hard giving him a chance..But it wasn't his fault he was tainted." You slowly got out of the bed wincing in pain as you prodded your stomach. Your clothes had been washed [courtesy of the lovely Maka] You put them on in the bathroom, and quickly dragged a comb through your ragged hair, and headed out the door as quickly as possible. The wounds you received weren't as bad as you had thought- On your forehead, a scar had been left it had been wrapped rather skillfully. It went directly across your temple. Your stomach had been wrapped in bandages also.

[time skip]

'Damn it....Why did I do this? he almost killed me so why the hell am I going to see him?...Shouldn't it be the other way around..?' You thought to yourself in remorse.

You kept wandering through the halls until you saw the people you we're indeed looking for; Kid, Liz and Patty.

"KID!" You shouted trying to catch up with him as you waved your hand to call him over, he turned around.

"I didn't expect to see you out so early.." He mumbled. He looked over you. Up and down, scanning your appearance. His scrutinizing gaze made you squirm in your socks.

"Is something wrong?" You asked with a concerned voice. You looked at yourself...Your symmetry was off of course at a time like this.
His eye twitched.

"ah..hell...don't tell me-"

"(Y-Y-Y/N)! your symmetry...It's gone.. what did you do to yourself!?" he whined. "I can't stand you're revolting..." those words crushed you in every single way. How could he say such things?! It wasn't your fault after all!
That set you off.

It wasn't long before your hand whipped across his face. He looked at you in shock, angered (E/C) orbs met his golden shocked ones.

"Excuse me, but you're the one who did this to me in the first place! So blame your damn self." your voice cracked, you felt tears coming on but blinked them away, you would be strong in front of him.

"I don't care if madness was eating away at you...You could of stopped yourself, I thought I was more to you!" you paused- no you weren't going to cry in front on him, you thought of it as a sign of weakness. "to think...I actually liked you..." you whispered to yourself before running off.

"Kid, what the heck was that for?! I know you have OCD but go fix this!" Liz practically yelled into the boys ear.

"Ooh...Kids got himself in trouble!" Patty giggled. With that, he ran after you.

He found you sitting on the edge of one of the schools many balconies.

"I FOUND YOU!" he yelled, panting a look of pride on his face.

You turned to face him. "Go away.." you sobbed into your hands.

"I can't control myself when it comes to symmetry..I'm sorry.."

"Yeah. I get it. Well I'm going to get going. Me and (W/N) are going to leave after I recover."

"What? That's crazy You can't leave! Don't let my idiotic actions decide what you want to do!"

"Who says I can't? I almost died, and something like that has never happened to me before. Therefore I'm leaving, It's not like I'm going to be missed anyway. Nobody cares if I leave." You said hastily- tears spilled down your cheeks- knowing full well that you were lying- letting the haze of anger overwhelm your speech. You faced him. His dark eyes met yours. A serious look crossed his face.

"I'll miss damn liar." He grabbed your hand and pulled you into him then leaned down to kiss you. His lips were feather soft, and were very hesitant at first- fearful of rejection. It took you a few seconds to process what was happening then started to kiss him back. It wasn't exactly perfect; but it was a sense of contact that made you feel special, wanted. You then carefully wrapped your arms around his shoulders, slowly. His hands found your waist and pulled you closer, deepening the contact. The kiss lasted for a few seconds before he pulled away, and then hugged you tightly.

'men..' You sighed.
My first shot at a fanfiction... So I'm doing a Death the Kid x reader because I happen to love Soul Eater!

PS- A lot of people put things like 'I love you!' or something similar like that in their fanfictions. Personally, I don't like doing that because I mean- only if you're older not like, 13. It also kinda ruins it for me, especially if you describe it in a strange way. It just seems morally wrong to me I can understand- 'I like you.' But not 'I love you.' In a younger story. It bugs me when I'm reading a fanfiction and they say 'I love you!' And what? their like...12? So if that's why anyone was wondering, I didn't mention anything of the sort.

PSS- If you see this one-shot posted anywhere else, aside from Deviantart- Please notify me. 
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loveNlucky Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016
Don't worry (name). Kid's just on his period
NoMore2009Memes Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
loveNlucky Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016
Haha #toreal! 🤗
IkillU4umoney Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015
Kid:Death the Kid Freak-Out ( Soul Eater )     Me:Stien Laugh ( Soul Eater ) Blackstar Laugh ( Soul Eater ) 
KittenTheAnimeLover Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2015
Men will be men and men are men. (Say that 5 times fast, I dare you.) Menemenemenemenemenemenemenuyuhguygjub CUTE!!!!!!!!!
EvelinArricato Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015
I would've just been like,
"F u. Your not symmetrical either."
whiteclaw001 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing and it's hard for me to believe that this is your first piece!!
It's awesome!!
Mackie567 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Kid's reaction: Death the Kid Freak-Out ( Soul Eater ) Kid WTF Icon Death The Kid    My reaction:Death the Kid Dance ( Soul Eater ) Maka-Gif#By-me Maka Yay ( Soul Eater ) Maka Blush ( Soul Eater ) Soul Eater Maka La 
EntryLevelOtaku Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
How is this your first fan-fic? I think you're lying.
tcmnikita Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
...It just is? Haha. No, surprisingly enough it's my first piece of writing. Personally now that I look back on it, it was just some arbitrary idea that I put on paper for a story. Nothing exceptional. I'm not even sure how this got so popular, to be honest. But I thank every single person that took their time to read it. ^^
Lightpelt122002 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015
I'm happy and sad Sweating a little... 
theotakugurl Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Student General Artist
I'm silently crying right now
RainbowFlare71023 Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too
E-Scythe Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welp.................that was........... 0.0 um.   Strange... But REALLY GOOD!!! XD
OMGimsoboredhahaha Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
Why are guys so confusing
CR33PY-C00KIES Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I need moarrrrr
CitrusOtakuTea Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Anna derp icon plz xD 
Novalis14 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
Actually they are 15,16. Black star is the youngest at like 13 14 but I get what you are saying, I always think the 'I love you' comes way to fast and easily...
FLAMELEELOVER200 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Professional Artist
That was really good you should do more like that.
BreezeTheEevee124 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014   Filmographer
Still I hate kid..,..,😓 I forgive him I guess
RebeccaKenealy95 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
yup clap clap Elsa Clapping  totally agree good job though
SerenaAquria Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
'Men' XDXD that killed me XD
crystallove13 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
girls: "boys.." *sigh*
boys: "girls.." *sigh*
Parents: "kids these days.." *sigh*

me: "I'm hungry.." *sigh*
Starstablefreak101 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL that would be me
haileycoslow Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
Me: I need more anime *sighs* and my favorite characters to come to life *sigh*
crystallove13 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
lolz yeah.-. anime production haven't been making or airing new awesome anime's
haileycoslow Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015
It's so 'not cool' as Soul would put it
crystallove13 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
lolz yea.. his dream to be a cool guy haha
cisutsu123 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
You deserve a medal xD
crystallove13 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
SkyPainter28 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha..... This is how me and my BF got together(even though we broke up a week ago) he pissed me off really badly, I ran off, he found me, we start kissing! Beautiful stories! :iconclapplz:
Dragonempress123 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
men, i totaly agree. big mysteries
Lightpelt122002 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
Exactly XD
heartofthewarrior13 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The ending reminds me of kh2 and the book is called the book of eibon
xXLilPrankingDevilXx Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*blushes* Okay, dat waz maximum rage to total love....
lyzz2399 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing! plz do more!!!
link-fangirl Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Dat kiss doh! ♡♡♡
*blushes uncontrollably from kissing Kid* "yaaaaay!
sugarplum10001 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awesome job! And I like your point about people writing 'I love you' in their fanfictions it's kinda stupid if you use it wrong. ("-_-)
mikunanime712 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student General Artist
please make another!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tcmnikita Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm thinking of making more xReader fanfics, if you have anyone in particular, as well as a plot, I'd be more than happy to make you one! (:
mikunanime712 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student General Artist
you should make more your really good at it. and maybe soul but can't think of a plot:(
CuteeCat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
"men" True That Stamp 
ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That last scene reminds me of when roxas left the organization.... *kingdom hearts 2 manga*
DatCrazyAsian3113 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Bipolar much (MAKE UP YOUR MIND!!!!!!)
bugbear123 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
to cute
Rebecca-Beilschmidt Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
England (Laughing) [V3] "Men..." XD
otakudreams139 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
also love the ending "men" lol
otakudreams139 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
so cuteWaaaah! Waaaah!
Fluffymittenzxx Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
'men..' Best thing ever

Does it remind anyone else to the song by studio killers? :3 If not heres the link…
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